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The invaders.

Postby Inferno34 » Thu Aug 16, 2012 6:26 am

The ruins of the city seemed quiet, aside from the rubble that fell in the cracked street. The dark looming shadows seemed to be moving. They where. The strange band of dark creatures wander the streets, looking for something, some lifeform, some organism, some living being. Starwarriors. The muttered this feverishly as they went along, peering trough the cracks. "They outnumber us way to much. We're hiding behind the cracks." A young, round, blue orb said, it's dark blue feet tapping, it's twin swords dull from the lack of shine. "Stop whinning. We're just supposed to do recon anyways." a young, girls voice said, the more light blue orb peering out of the small cracks. "Aqua, do you really think we can get out of here?" the young boy replied. Just then the light blue girl gasped, "Blade, what's that?!" They both looked over now, Blade wondered what the commotion was. He saw, among the dark figures, a lone, red figure, with a black hot on hi's head, red sash across it, was standing up against them. The lone wanderer said, "You mock the darkstar warriors. I shall liberate you from the slavery of shame." A small puff of fire appeared right over his forehead, and his fists burned with a proud fire. He rushed to one solider and punched him past the others, it was such a perfect punch, the others were knocked on there backs by the force of there ally as he flew by them. "It's him. The owner of the inferno star!" a soldier proclaimed. The two young blue puffs rushed off, hoping to report this at headquarters in grape garden.

The one known as inferno must have seen them, because he rushed off after them, a few dark soldiers at his feet. He saw the giant landscape they headed for and grinned. "Maybe I can be of help to them." He said rather cooly.

Blade and Aqua had rushed into a giant metal building hidden amidst the trees of the gardens. There, all the residences that had escaped the plague of war lived. This was the only place they could, what with the world littered with Darkstar. "Sir! We've picked up something hug!" Blade was in a panic, talking to a dark green star warrior with a black cap and a baseball bat on his back, he was a dark green color. "We already have it on the radar. Can you tell me why a Darkstar is headed this way?" Blade was surprised, and could only say, "Darkstar? But what we saw was-", "Me..." The one known as Inferno had entered, a small smile on his face. He walked forward and looked at the scenery of the building. High tech gear not normal to this side of the planet Popstar. Suddenly, all the people I the room where on him, weapons, abilities. Whatever they could grab. This wasn't how he expected to be greeted, despite where he stood in the situation. But all he said was, "Nice scenery you've got here. So where do I sign up?"
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Re: The invaders.

Postby SuperStarKirby » Thu Aug 16, 2012 9:20 pm

Sorry, I don't know what to do here Inferno, it looks like ya got a good story, maybe you should post this in the Fiction Forest.
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Re: The invaders.

Postby Inferno34 » Fri Aug 17, 2012 10:47 am

Wait I had no idea. Could post this there. XD this was am intro and I didn't know where to post it. Thx.
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Re: The invaders.

Postby SuperStarKirby » Fri Aug 17, 2012 8:03 pm

Welcome :smile: :very_happy: :azn:
Just thought I would let you no that my signature has no good features and that if you are reading this you should stop. If you are still reading I urge you to stop as you are wasting you time and effort on something that is utterly point less and you could be doing something you enjoy right now rather then read my signature on a forum and don't lie we all know no one wants to do that and absolutely everybody has something better to do. If you are still not sure what to do maybe read the next persons post or make your own response. If you read all of this you are a very strange person. Because it was a waste of time it had no point, see ya.

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Re: The invaders.

Postby Kapus » Sat Aug 18, 2012 10:40 am

Is this fan fiction, or is it intended as a prologue to an RP?
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Re: The invaders.

Postby Inferno34 » Sun Aug 19, 2012 7:21 am

It's intended s a prologue. I ment to put more, but haven't gotten around to doing it yet. I will when I have time, if not, il move it to the fan fix section.
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Re: The invaders.

Postby Inferno34 » Sun Aug 19, 2012 7:39 am

I just added in more for the prologue, but I like to try to take things in a sort of cliffhanger like moment, mainly so others can join in the story before it even begins.
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Re: The invaders.

Postby redguy » Sat Sep 22, 2012 6:43 am

its a fan fiction
I Thought i was wasting time so i just went on this site and than i was in a whole new world.This club rules :smile: :smile:
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