Kirby Dream in Nightmare-Land Heads up

[SuperStarKirby]

Okay this isn't actually the story its just a heads up for the story like telling you certain stuff your read in the story here's a list of characters that will be in the story

Kirby: Obviously he would be in it. In the beginning of the story he is sucked into the alternate universe version of dreamland known as Nightmare-Land, where he meets other SuperStars. He lost the ability to Copy when sucked to Nightmare-Land

Meta-Knight: He is also sucked into Nightmare-Land like Kirby. He loses his Galaxia.

Kybir: He is Kirby's alternate counterpart in the dimension, and is yellow P.S he is meant to be the player two Kirby from KDL2 who was called Kiiba in japan which is a switched version of Kaabi, so Kiiba properly translated would be Kybir.

Sparky: He is green SuperStar he specializes in the spark ability to the point where his always in the Spark ability even when sent into Nightmare-Land, his is part of a trio, his personality is Courageous .

Crispy: The same as Sparky except that he is red and always in Fire, other member of the trio, his personality is hot-headed.

Misty: Is like the others, she specializes in Ice, she is blue, and is the third member of the trio, her personality is serious and is easily offended, but is the smartest.

King Dedede: He is the reason why Kirby and the other SuperStars are in Nightmare-Land, he stole a Magical Bottle called the Good-Day Bottle which held the genie Gudia(Good-Day) who can grant him five wishes, his first was to send all people how could pose a threat.

Gudia: Is the Genie inhabiting the Good-Day Bottle, he wears a crown with a 5-point star on it which shows how many wishes are left.

And there will be more character's appearing in the story but maybe not as main as the one listed above^. The story won't be posted in a while because I want to type a lot of the story then post a chapter every week kay

[mamthew42]

For the record, Kiiba has an English name. His official name is Keeby. For real. And his official Japanese name is not Kiiba - it's Kiiby, which is a mix of "Kirby" and "kiiro", Japanese for yellow. It's not a switched name.

Also he's not from DL2. He's originally from dream course. He's also in Nightmare in Dreamland. DL2 isn't two player.

Also Dedede and Meta Knight have never officially been at odds with each other, so Meta Knight probably wouldn't constitute a threat to Dedede's plans. And Meta Knight didn't get galaxia until after amazing mirror. Before that, he had Master, which suggests that he's pretty much able to use any sword without trouble. Which means that losing galaxia really isn't actually too much of a setback for the knight.

For Kirby, losing the ability to copy isn't that big a deal either, seeing as how he made his way through DL1 fairly easily, but I hope you go the MWW route and have him searching for copy statues, so he can still use powers, just not from copying enemies.

Despite this, I'm kinda confused as to why your three OCs are apparently just better than kirby and meta knight. Kirby loses his ability to copy, Meta Knight loses his sword (which obviously was supposed to be a lot more detrimental than it actually would be), but your OCs don't lose their inherent abilities? You need to make sure your universe's rules are consistent.

[SuperStarKirby]

Okay, the three OCs aren't meant to seem better than Kirby it is just meant to give them some singularity and the reason with them always being in that form will be reviled later in the story, and with Kybir might I remind you that his from another dimension he's just based off him, and the Galaxia thing is because that is only name for his sword I know of and how do you know this doesn't take place after the Amazing Mirror, and beside the is fanon, thanks for posting .

[mamthew42]

No, I didn't mean this takes place before amazing mirror. I meant that Meta Knight has used more than one sword before; galaxia isn't special.