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Frillneck- FEAR ME

Postby Kazemaru » Mon Jul 04, 2011 9:54 pm

This is the story of Midori`s Brother Frillneck, and his plot to rule Kirby Earth.
Frillneck:  Yellow Kirby, has the voice of invader Zim. Very self centered and thinks that he is he mighty ruler of everything.
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[align=center]Chapter 1 The morning of Frillneck[/align]
Dim light shone through his box. "YAAAAWN!" Frillneck was awake, inside his very dirty cardboard box in a dark alley. Many Kirbie's
were walking up the streets doing daily business. They had no idea of the insignificant pest within the alley. "Fools! They
do not know the power of FRILLNECK!" He yelled. A young pink Kirby stopped and looked towards the dark alley. "Momma?" he asked his Pink mother, "Yes Dear?" She answered. "...oh nevermind." They both went back to daily business.
"Disgusting creatures..." Frillneck muttered. He got up and went to a garbage can for scraps. "Look at me!" as he looked into
a broken mirror piece. "I am filthy! What is the great Frillneck, rummaging for revolting scraps. I disgust myself!" He found
4 moldy rotten apple peels and scarfed them down. "Bletch...It`ll have to do" he mumbled trough gritted teeth. He went though the streets as Kirbie's glanced at the filthy piece of nature among them. "Pathetic Kirbie's..." He whispered to himself..
[align=center]End of chapter 1[/align]

Credits to my brother Frillneck for making up the character. Also hes nothing like the frillneck in this story so be nice :P
He came up with the idea when playing brawl.
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Re: Frillneck- FEAR ME

Postby Jiggulypuff » Mon Jul 04, 2011 10:37 pm

Great storyline
ImageTHAT sir is a TRUE victory dance [img]

GLaDOS-But we can put our differences aside,for
science.You monster.


"Redeem us both Daniel, and put a stop to this"
*Hilarious voice* "THIS GUY'S GOT ENOUGH WINE TO LAST US THE WHOLE YEAR! OR AT LEAST UNTIL TOMMOROW..."
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Re: Frillneck- FEAR ME

Postby Khaos » Mon Jul 04, 2011 11:50 pm

Any heros in this story?
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Re: Frillneck- FEAR ME

Postby Kazemaru » Mon Jul 04, 2011 11:52 pm

Mabye in the next chapter. In a way Frillneck is kinda the hero. He fails as a villian anyway xD
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Re: Frillneck- FEAR ME

Postby sirmidor » Tue Jul 05, 2011 3:39 am

is Frillneck an anti-hero?
justice always prevails, because the victor claims justice.

''on the sixth day, god created man in his own image''
science has shown that the first people were black. guess that means god is black.
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Re: Frillneck- FEAR ME

Postby Kazemaru » Tue Jul 05, 2011 4:01 am

I guess you could say that, But i view im as a pathetic villian. So i guess yes an Anti-Hero.
He doesnt do anything good, course hes bad at being...bad.
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