The hands of evil - a kirby fic

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The hands of evil - a kirby fic

Postby PengiKirby » Wed Jan 12, 2011 9:33 pm

the hands of evil; kind of rushed, but okay
chapter 1
  The lights had gone white. The going from a dark room to this, it seemed to take a beating on Kirby's eyes. He blinked a few times, and it was gone.
  Where was he? The little head bolted upright. This was not his cozy house. This was not the nice woods. This was not dreamland. It wasn't ripple star or any  other planet or star he knew. No place he ever walked. No room he ever entered. He was processing all of the places he remembered when a rotting apple slammed into his face.
He pushed it away, disgusted. He was never disgusted. Was that even food? He looks behind himself curiously and got his answer. The 'apple' started to mutate. It grew into a mad apple. Then, some more into something he never saw. Like, a big version of himself as an apple. It started to talk in a distorted voice. It sounded familiar and dark. “Hey, Kirby, do you ever wonder who you are?â€
Because PengiKirby said so.
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Re: The hands of evil - a kirby fic

Postby Khaos » Wed Jan 12, 2011 10:57 pm

i love this! please continue!
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Re: The hands of evil - a kirby fic

Postby MelonBread975 » Thu Jan 13, 2011 4:04 pm

Eh, it's okay, you can continue.
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Re: The hands of evil - a kirby fic

Postby Zikki-Dee » Thu Jan 13, 2011 6:58 pm

ur a booty admin now, face! IT's great, though, everyone seems to be writing dark fan fics now....please continue!
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Re: The hands of evil - a kirby fic

Postby Khaos » Thu Jan 13, 2011 7:11 pm

mad apple? i love those things
EDIT: Please tell me an epic battle going to happen
Last edited by Khaos on Thu Jan 13, 2011 7:24 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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